I feel pretty much the same way... I'm not terribly happy with the fic as a whole, though I'm at a loss for a way to fix it other than making it a whole lot longer and going into more depth, which I honestly don't feel like doing. Either that or scrapping the ending and having Jack & co. go along with Victor's orders (which seems even more out of character for them). Am quite at a loss... will probably have to chalk this one up to one of my lesser efforts and move on :/