You know, this made me sad of the best kind of sadness because in the end there is hope for danny and Martin and hoping for them to overcome all of this that seems too much... is the best gift you could give me.
I loved how you filled the gap that was obviously there in the episode, those missing scene you wrote are now vivid in my mind as if I had seen them.
I was screaming with joy when Martin stopped Danny from going away and really this is so more good than everything I could ever say.
I loved "Laura" and I had noticed her in the episode, the little nod she gives to Martin, I like how you created her story for her and used it to tell us something of Danny.
This is simply perfection in all its aspect, and thank you very much!