When I read this story I don't see the words I see the characters in my head talking to one another and they are as real there as they are on screen, which says so much about how well you have the characers and their voices nailed

Wow, thanks! Very high praise :) I try hard to hear them as I'm writing, so the dialogue will have a familiar flow and sound to myself and whoever's reading... which sounds suspiciously like I want to hear the voices in my head, but there you go :)