There really are no other words. I just... blown away. I love where you ended it, so open with so much hope and so many possibilities. And okay, I'm a sucker for the fade to black resolution, but this just worked so well here. Everything just came together and it's not okay, but you know it's going to be.
God, I'm probably not making any sense. I can even describe how I feel. Just kind of overwhelmed and sad and happy and emotionally wrung out and peaceful and a dozen other things that I can't pinpoint for the life of me. Gah, I'm not saying this right.
This really was a beautiful story, though. The way you painted Martin --so conflicted, so intense, so on the verge of falling apart. It seemed so true to life. This entire universe was just... brilliant. So much love.
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There really are no other words. I just... blown away. I love where you ended it, so open with so much hope and so many possibilities. And okay, I'm a sucker for the fade to black resolution, but this just worked so well here. Everything just came together and it's not okay, but you know it's going to be.
God, I'm probably not making any sense. I can even describe how I feel. Just kind of overwhelmed and sad and happy and emotionally wrung out and peaceful and a dozen other things that I can't pinpoint for the life of me. Gah, I'm not saying this right.
This really was a beautiful story, though. The way you painted Martin --so conflicted, so intense, so on the verge of falling apart. It seemed so true to life. This entire universe was just... brilliant. So much love.
Thank you for sharing this with us.