This is gorgeous. Way more than a PWP because there's a beauty to your language.

My favorite moment is:
“Then fucking hurry up,” Danny says, shifting impatiently
That made me laugh and humor and sex go great together.

And Martin’s saying something, or breathing it, and he doesn’t know if it’s obscenity or prayer, only knows that the breath scraping along his throat has been shaped into words, can see Danny reacting to them, feel the fine body underneath him tensing up into him.
Lovely. Just lovely.

I really like "Inside-Out and Across" too.