ext_1106 ([identity profile] cpt-untouchable.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] aesc 2006-03-13 10:57 pm (UTC)

Wow, I really like this. Beautiful subtext, tension, and clarity. The scent of burned casings and blood set the scene better than a paragraph of backstory could have.
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