Oh my freaking God, girl! You are surpassing yourself with this story, this AU is my new crack. I read the last three chapter one after the other and I couldn't stop even if I were supposed to do something else completely *ahem*.
Danny and Martin hot sex under the trees (I have a fascination with trees lately) and the leaves leaving a kaleidoscopic light on them, it is such a beautiful image that I can't stop thinking of it.
And all that is happening to Martin, you caught the insecurities and confusion of teens perfectly with Martin, caught Danny too and all his issues and never once this was boring.
I'm eager to know what role Preston will play in their relationship, I'm scared for the arrival of Victor and I wish Danny wouldn't suffer so much and would realize that he is the best thing to happen to Martin.
In case it wasn't clear, I loved it, i'm still loving it, actually, I think I'm going to love it forever.
*flails*