desertport: Kaneda on his bike (Default)
desertport ([personal profile] desertport) wrote in [personal profile] aesc 2006-11-14 12:05 am (UTC)

Whee! What a delight to come home and find you're writing SPN!

This was awesome: pitch-perfect dialogue, and a Sam and Dean who register as the ones I know from the show. Especially Sam. Or maybe, especially Sam-through-Dean's-eyes, there may be a difference. Either way, excellent characterization. Dean pondering his luck strikes me as just right, he's very troubled, but trying to be casual about it.

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