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aesc ([personal profile] aesc) wrote2008-04-22 07:42 pm

.art: Uncounted (John/Rodney) PG

Uncounted (John/Rodney) PG

My first submission for [livejournal.com profile] paintedspires (there has been a lot of awesome stuff posted already--go and see, if you haven't yet!), answering the prompt "I didn't lose my mind, it was mine to give away." A small version is under the cut, with a link to the full-res (900.1200) version following.

I also say thank you to [livejournal.com profile] beadattitude, [livejournal.com profile] dogeared, and [livejournal.com profile] sheafrotherdon for encouragement along the way and to [livejournal.com profile] summertea and [livejournal.com profile] villainny for beta-viewing and providing very useful and much-needed comments. If this isn't as good as it should be, it isn't their fault.

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Passed the tear test!

[identity profile] beadattitude.livejournal.com 2008-04-22 11:49 pm (UTC)(link)
::choked voice:: I think you hit it, hon. ::lip quivers::

::nods nods::
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[identity profile] kashmir1.livejournal.com 2008-04-22 11:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh this just. Oh. Wow.

[identity profile] tardis80.livejournal.com 2008-04-22 11:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh! This is perfect. The images and the few words you chose fit this so perfectly. And I love the images fade away as through smoke. *huggles the boys*
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[personal profile] aurora 2008-04-22 11:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh wow!!!

[identity profile] clear-as-blood.livejournal.com 2008-04-22 11:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, just gorgeous. And moving too. I love the texture and blending and all of it really.

[identity profile] sheafrotherdon.livejournal.com 2008-04-22 11:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Hello, neurotic, party of one? What do you MEAN, if it's not as good as it should be? You are out of your ever-loving mind, sweets, if you think this is anything but gorgeous, layered, complex and beautiful. You sum up so much, and capture so many complicated feelings in shades of gray which - I may not be an artist, but I know how hard that is to do, to capture nuance and fragility in such a muted palette. It's GORGEOUS.

[identity profile] kimberweeme.livejournal.com 2008-04-22 11:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, wow. This is gorgeous. The puzzle pieces in the corner, the soft gray of it all, the numbers veering off into meaningless scribbles... This is cloudy and painful, powerful and stunning.

[identity profile] equusentric.livejournal.com 2008-04-23 12:00 am (UTC)(link)
Simply, heartachingly beautiful. It says all it needs to. ♥

[identity profile] neevebrody.livejournal.com 2008-04-23 12:05 am (UTC)(link)
This is so many kinds of wonderful I don't know where to start. To the eye it's stunning - stark and muted, black, white, gray and all the values in between - which is how I see John/Rodney. To the heart, it is straight forward, gentle yet complicated, but so full of the selfless and of love. I'd say you nailed it. It's beautiful.
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[identity profile] telesilla.livejournal.com 2008-04-23 12:05 am (UTC)(link)
Oh my, this is lovely. And just...twisty chest in the best way.

[identity profile] dogeared.livejournal.com 2008-04-23 12:09 am (UTC)(link)
OH, it's so saaaaaad!! A;asldfaskdfj, sad and beautiful and intricate, visually and emotionally, and I'm amazed, as always, at the infinite care you take with details and layers, text and subtext, and oh oh, I especially love John's face—achy and just perfect.

[identity profile] newkidfan.livejournal.com 2008-04-23 12:10 am (UTC)(link)
Too awesome. Seriously.

[identity profile] sardonicsmiley.livejournal.com 2008-04-23 12:17 am (UTC)(link)
Oh. Wow. I'm pretty sure that this couldn't be any more perfect than it is. The puzzle pieces, the muted colors, the circle around Rodney's head and John's expression. It's...wow. Beautiful and full of pain.
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[identity profile] stillane.livejournal.com 2008-04-23 12:22 am (UTC)(link)
oh.

I wish I had wiser, more important words to tell you how stunning this is, but I can't seem to find them. It makes me think in small, quiet terms, maybe because its own thought is so very big. What I perhaps love most about it, though, is that the greys let little things hide within them, and I get to notice something new every time I look at it again.

So, yeah. Beautiful all around.

[identity profile] sharky-chan.livejournal.com 2008-04-23 12:30 am (UTC)(link)
Simply gorgeous. The black and white is so powerful, and the textures are stunning. So simple and understated, it's fantastic *o*.

[identity profile] not-sally.livejournal.com 2008-04-23 12:43 am (UTC)(link)
This is as gorgeous as it is heartbreaking.
I love, love, LOVE al your graphics.

[identity profile] incidental-fire.livejournal.com 2008-04-23 12:59 am (UTC)(link)
Wow. This...I have no words for this. It is just so achingly beautiful. The words, the equations, the puzzle pieces, the pictures...they all just blend together and tell their story so amazingly. Phenomenal.

[identity profile] winkingstar.livejournal.com 2008-04-23 01:06 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, my heart. *sniffs* This is stunningly gorgeous and heartbreaking and conveys so much with so little (gray colours, not many words). The puzzle pieces and the unraveling equations just zing straight to my heart. The pictures of the boys are perfect. And there's an echo-y feeling about the whole thing that just makes it even more achy. *wibbles*
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[identity profile] summertea.livejournal.com 2008-04-23 01:39 am (UTC)(link)
*BITES LIP* you kill me so often, H. ;~;
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[identity profile] ainsley.livejournal.com 2008-04-23 01:42 am (UTC)(link)
That's amazingly good.

[identity profile] highonstargate.livejournal.com 2008-04-23 02:02 am (UTC)(link)
Wow! that is beautiful!
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2008-04-23 03:02 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, oh, this is so beautiful take on the prompt and heart aching in its best. s;lkdjfnlgkj;lkjt. Gorgeous.

lovely, heartbreaking, amazing.

[identity profile] kormantic.livejournal.com 2008-04-23 03:10 am (UTC)(link)
other words in that vein.

[identity profile] amberlynne.livejournal.com 2008-04-23 03:17 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, Rodney. That's so lovely. It's sparse and complex and just so very Rodney. AMAZING!

[identity profile] propinquitine.livejournal.com 2008-04-23 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, gorgeous. There's so much in this image, it's wonderful. The faint flowers in the upper right-hand corner, for instance; I didn't notice them on first view, and then looked again and-- oh. Beautiful.

This has a great sense of flow, too. The puzzle pieces really start the momentum from the skin-texture at the top through the unspooling equations right down to stark black Rodney at the bottom. Or, that's how it hit me, anyway. Short form: I really liked this! Lovely job!

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