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aesc ([personal profile] aesc) wrote2005-07-01 12:12 am

[drabble] The Heart-Chest [Théoden] G

Title: The Heart-Chest
By: HF
Work: LotR
Character: Théoden
Warnings: Angst?
Disclaimer: Tolkien hoc fecit.

Notes: For the [livejournal.com profile] tolkien_weekly "Edoras" challenge. Responding to this was... well, it was inevitable. Can't stay away from the OE.


THE HEART-CHEST

Young men do not know that we come to our end, for they are young, and see only the glory of these gilded walls, the floor-tiles, the proud necks of the horses decorating the gables. They hear the past, the voices of Eorl, of Helm.

They do not know that these golden walls must topple, and that darkness must swallow up our glory.

They see the plains and hear on the winds battle and the promise of victory. But they do not see the wolf, eagle, and raven circling Edoras, or hear the thoughts of an old and weary man.

-end-

Notes: The title is a translation of Old English words like breostcofa and ferðlocan (literally "breast-coffer" and "heart-lock"), poetic terms that refer to the mind and thought. Very often they refer to thoughts or reflections not shared with others, but that remain locked inside. The drabble was inspired by the OE poem The Wanderer in general, and these lines specifically:

Truly, I know
what is a fair virtue in a man:
that he bind fast his heart,
guard his innermost thought [ferðlocan], think what he will.
A weary heart cannot stand against fate,
nor the troubled mind be of help. (ll. 11b-16)

Oh, further note: The wolf, eagle, and raven are the three "beasts of battle" in Germanic narrative. They appear either as harbingers of violence (e.g., in the OE Judith they escort the vengeful Hebrews to the battlefield) or come to consume the remains of the dead.

[identity profile] ren-aleria.livejournal.com 2005-07-01 04:33 am (UTC)(link)
lovely, lovely, lovely

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2005-07-01 04:34 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you, thank you, thank you :)

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2005-07-01 04:35 am (UTC)(link)
*jawdrop*

Wow.

That's just rich and wonderful.

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2005-07-01 04:40 am (UTC)(link)
*beam* Thank you!

Er, you dropped something :)

[identity profile] silvermoonlady.livejournal.com 2005-07-01 02:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice! You've captured the weight of years that reflect on younger ways in well chosen words. I particularly appreciate the background you gave in the author's note; I do so love blending in the research into a narrative, and symbolism can be such a great tool for a form like the drabble. Fab:)

SilverMoonLady

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2005-07-01 07:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I do Old English-type things in RL, and always welcome the opportunity to transfer some of it to fandom. And people say you can't use this stuff :) Glad you enjoyed it!

[identity profile] silvermoonlady.livejournal.com 2005-07-04 02:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, how very cool! Am an ex-cultural anthro student, and there's nothing more fun than stepping back to take a observatory look and then dive back in to use it in fiction:))
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[identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com 2005-07-01 03:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I love it when you write OE-inspired stuff... makes me happy! *grin* And this is lovely, and captures Theoden's weariness and fear for his land so well!

~Kris

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2005-07-01 07:34 pm (UTC)(link)
*snuggles you* And I'm happy you're happy :) Yay for OE!

[identity profile] raletha.livejournal.com 2005-07-01 04:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Wonderful! Thank you Hilary. I adore Theoden; I adore your OE/LotR writings.

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2005-07-01 07:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much, Raletha! Glad you like :)

[identity profile] faramir-boromir.livejournal.com 2005-07-02 10:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow. Feel like I've been hit upside the head with ...Edoras. Thanks for the head-slap of enlightenment.

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2005-07-03 12:44 am (UTC)(link)
No one has ever accused the Rohirrim (or the Anglo-Saxons, I suppose) of being subtle *g*

[identity profile] invisibly-inked.livejournal.com 2005-07-03 07:21 am (UTC)(link)
I swear, I typed you a message, but it came out blank. It was <3 for your fic. Beautiful, as always.

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2005-07-04 03:01 am (UTC)(link)
Ew... it ate your heart! Sick, sick LJ.

But thank you :) <3!

[identity profile] aervir.livejournal.com 2005-07-09 02:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my, this is absolutely stunning! As someone else has already said in this thread, I do adore your Old English-inspired Tolkien fanfiction.

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2005-07-09 10:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Geþancie þe! :)