[eek! crap! what happened?!] for the first paragraph of the comment before Jenn's, read:]

And he looks up, up up up the long line of John's torso, the loosening shell of his jeans as John shoves them down his hips--skinny, slinky hips, powerful thighs pushing Rodney's apart--how John's eyes are dark with brighter flecks, and he wears shadow and the dim yellow light from the side lamp.