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aesc ([personal profile] aesc) wrote2008-04-30 10:59 pm

.au coookie: medieval steampunk doodle thing

I'm not entirely sure where this came from, or where it might go, but I blame this on: 1.) current RL, 2.) [livejournal.com profile] steammmpunk, 3.) my kink/cliche fest prompt, 4.) everything else I should be working on.


"I thought," Radek of Bohemia said slowly, "that you were dead."

"A lot of people say that." Rodney McKay, who had been glaring out the dirty pane of their window, turned to glare at Radek. "Fortunately for me, it keeps turning out not to be true."

"Yes, well, that will change sooner or later." Radek's rooms in the boardinghouse already strained to accommodate him and his small collection of books; in the six years since their last meeting, he had forgotten how effortlessly Rodney's presence filled any empty space around him and Radek found himself, with no small resentment, making himself unobtrusive. McKay stalked the ten paces of open floor between the window and door, pausing to stare outside and talk to himself. His hands moved in the absent twitches Radek had learned to associate with McKay deep in thought.

"It may change tonight," Radek added when it became clear Rodney's attention had shifted elsewhere, "if your… your acquaintance does not come." Or if he does. "You have not told me much of this… this Daniel, and why he and Lady Weir said you should search out myself and this other man."

"I told you," Rodney snapped, "I met Daniel in Egypt, and Lady Weir was on pilgrimage to the Holy Land." As if that explained everything, which for Rodney, probably did. "And both of them agreed, as Daniel would be risking his very valuable neck to come back here and be useful, you would be the person best suited to help me, along with the other, if he ever shows up." Rodney pulled a small, very illegal timepiece from the fold of his robe and studied it. "Late," he snorted. "I break canon law to get here and he's late."

"And this would be the reason why you desecrated a holy place to return to Paris in this way." A vein in Radek's temple twitched at the thought; the Chamber of Elijah had been forbidden to all but the most devout for a hundred years, the chapel with its alcoves that, when entered, could, in the bright flash of rapture, transported a man hundreds of leagues away.

And to make matters worse, Radek thought bleakly, Rodney had stolen this… this, a thing only the archbishops, the ones touched by holy grace, were allowed to make use of, a thing which now sat in all its mystery on Radek's worktable.

It did nothing in and of itself, Rodney had said over Radek's frantic murmurs of heresy, arrest, trial, and certain death. Over a foot tall, faceted like a jewel, dull amber inscribed with Potentia sanctitatis sum inscribed in the base, and by all rights – by decree no less – it belonged in the possession of the Holy See, not the hands of a wandering scholar who had been the terror of the Paris professors.

"It belongs," Rodney said peevishly to Radek's very sensible point, "to a commune in Provence. Or it did before the Inquisitors took it. That's what they're doing now, you know, searching out relics and taking them back to Rome. They're paralyzing us." His hand slipped into a pocket. "The Porta Christi in the Vatican… They brought that back from Constantinople fifty years ago, and they know what it does now. And they know I know."

That was the sort of casual announcement that made Rodney difficult to live with. Radek buried his face in his hands.

"I shared a room with you for the one year you needed to convince the faculty to expel you," Radek muttered. "This does not give you the right to have me hunted down."

"Oh, calm down," Rodney snapped. "If I can risk my very valuable life and even more valuable head for this, you can too. The Vatican is taking away the potentiae that make the cities run, the transporters, the lights…" He gestured to Radek's naquadah lamp. "Even that, sooner or later. And I think I know why, and we need to stop it."

"Why?" Radek tried not to think of the Dominicans that had come nosing around; very rarely priests ventured into the student quarter, which was why Radek stayed here in the first place, but if the canes domini were investigating owners of small devices such as Radek's lamp, or Kavanagh of Dublin, who cooked his meals on a small plate heated by the same substance… Maybe Rodney had a point. "How is this mysterious man supposed to help?"

"Lady Weir wouldn't tell me that." Rodney came to rest on a rickety chair. He stared at the potentia. "She only told me to leave a message at Ostia on my way back through Rome, addressed to poimen Iohannes, and he would come."

"A shepherd?" Radek blinked. 'Shepherd' meant 'priest' more than likely, and why Rodney would want one involved escaped him. He said this and Rodney frowned at him and demanded to know if Radek honestly believed Rodney hadn't thought about that.

"I didn't live this long by being stupid," Rodney said, which was not an answer in Radek's opinion. Then again, Rodney had survived Oxford and Paris, and then five years in the East, associating with a known heretic/mystic and a noblewoman who, so the stories ran, had more of the heretic in her than was politically sensible for her husband to admit. Perhaps it was an answer, or perhaps luck.

A knock sounded at the door, three times, hollow but echoing as the last call to judgment.

[identity profile] clear-as-blood.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 03:13 am (UTC)(link)
I wonder who this shepherd'll be. otsdkv83y4

More?

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
I wonder who this shepherd'll be.

Ohhhh, I have no idea! Really! I swear! ;)

[identity profile] elizabeth perry (from livejournal.com) 2008-05-01 03:14 am (UTC)(link)
::claps hands:: This makes me squeeful in ways I do not want to explain. \o/

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 03:20 am (UTC)(link)
Yay! That is happy to hear \o/

[identity profile] tropes.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 03:16 am (UTC)(link)
Why do you TEASE us with snippets?! @_@

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 03:18 am (UTC)(link)
Because I am a bad person? XD

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[identity profile] maxinemayer.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, I love this more than anything! Please please more more please! It's intriguing and fun and maybe a little religious (I love religious stories, even the one where Rodney's a priest and falls in love with John anyway!) and wonderfully written and exciting and please more!!!

If you feel like it!

Hugs and thanks for sharing.
Love, max

Re: .au coookie: medieval steampunk doodle thing - story

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 03:43 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! One of the things I have to figure out is the extent of Rodney's affiliation with the Church... my impression is that he might be a lay priest (so he isn't ordained), or else something of a wandering scholar who won't devote himself to any particular vocation :D
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[personal profile] sage 2008-05-01 03:21 am (UTC)(link)
Ooooh! I am intrigued -- SGA in the 13th century is an awesome idea.

*looking forward to more*

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 03:39 am (UTC)(link)
I think SGA in any century is pretty awesome, myself :D Thank you!

[identity profile] amberlynne.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 03:26 am (UTC)(link)
OPEN THE DOOR, RODNEY! Jeezo. *sigh*

You are such a tease.

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 03:38 am (UTC)(link)
You are such a tease.

Remember what I said about what I do to people I love :>

[identity profile] raiining.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 03:35 am (UTC)(link)
Ohhh, I's likes.


??? So confused, but loving it :)

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 03:38 am (UTC)(link)
It is all very mysterious to me, too :D :D :D

[identity profile] toft-froggy.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 03:42 am (UTC)(link)
OMG! EEE! He's like - a thirteenth century Indiana Jones! AWESOME!

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 03:45 am (UTC)(link)
OMG yis yis yis!! And you know he spent a lot of time acquiring knowledge and sunburn out in the Holy Land :>

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[identity profile] mirabile-dictu.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 03:46 am (UTC)(link)
*waits impatiently for Rodney to open that door*

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 04:30 am (UTC)(link)
I have to work up the correct blend of snark, impatience, and trepidation first :D

[identity profile] tardis80.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 03:59 am (UTC)(link)
OH SO INTRIGUING. I LOVE THIS ALREADY!

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 04:33 am (UTC)(link)
Yayyyyy *is happy!*
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[personal profile] grammarwoman 2008-05-01 04:12 am (UTC)(link)
More. Please. Yes.

(Soon?)

I loved "The Name of the Rose" and wept at the burning of the library, so this is right up my alley.

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 04:30 am (UTC)(link)
I would love The Name of the Rose, but the library burning depresses me enormously :D

[identity profile] bitter-crimson.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 04:23 am (UTC)(link)
Haha, in a really vaguely related tangent, this gave me a fic idea. But I will probably never write it. XD

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 04:36 am (UTC)(link)
OMG WHAT IS IT WHAT IS IT YOU MUST TELL MEEEEEE.

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[identity profile] lilyfarfalla.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 04:30 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh, religious/political intrigue + SGA + searching and restoring holy objects! So fun!

And you know, it also has an almost noir feel to it. ('I thought you were dead.' 'A lot of people say that.'...'A knock sounded at the door, three times....') Not quite so fatalistic in tone, but there is the whole righting wrongs and fighting corruption and whatnot. Maybe I'm wrong, but I really like the way it falls on the ear.

(Plus, RODNEY, you are AWESOME.)

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 04:38 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! Sometimes just posting this stuff helps me get a better idea of what something ought to do, and things are starting to clear up now in the religious/political intrigue area.

And you know, it also has an almost noir feel to it.

Now, if I could only graft that onto the actual noir I'm trying to write, I would be all set :D
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 04:59 am (UTC)(link)
I'LL TAKE BLAME ANY DAY FOR THIS KIND OF THING HOMG SO SO INTRIGUING AND PERFECT

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 05:05 am (UTC)(link)
Yes, well, you are very insidious with your steammmpunklikeness.

*smooches you*
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[personal profile] siria 2008-05-01 06:03 am (UTC)(link)
I LOVE YOU.

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 03:09 pm (UTC)(link)
*snorfles yams!*

[identity profile] argosy.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 06:37 am (UTC)(link)
Eeeee. I love it. Like The DaVinci Code, except, you know, good. I adore the world you've set up, but you are a horrible, horrible tease.

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[identity profile] the-oscar-cat.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 09:47 am (UTC)(link)
\o/\o/\o/\o/

*makes EEEEE!! face of joy*

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 03:12 pm (UTC)(link)
*EEEEEEEs back at you!*

[identity profile] mecurtin.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 10:38 am (UTC)(link)
Ya know you could distract [livejournal.com profile] toft_froggy from her medievalist studies to give you background help, if necessary. Because I WANTS MOOOOOOOOOOAR!!1! asd;fsdfjklf;ljd

Now I'm visualizing the Wraith as Disco Dominicans, you know. Curse you!

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 03:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay, moar! I might have to distract Toft just on principle *g*

[identity profile] pennyplainknits.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 01:09 pm (UTC)(link)
This is awesome- it reminded me of Bernard Cornwell's Grail quest series, with the scholarly monk and the archer searching for the spear of St George.

If it helps I think it was accpeted that parish priests (especially in smaller villages) would have lovers, certainly a lot of the literature around the time indicates that the men of the cloth were not as celibate as they were supposed to be.

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 03:15 pm (UTC)(link)
certainly a lot of the literature around the time indicates that the men of the cloth were not as celibate as they were supposed to be.

Heh, when are they ever? *wry look* Chaucer had to get it from somewhere.

[identity profile] dogeared.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 01:17 pm (UTC)(link)
ooooooo oh this is so COOL! I'll just sit here for a while, intrigued. :>

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 03:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Eeeeee *snorfles Jenns!*
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[personal profile] trobadora 2008-05-01 01:26 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG, that is so awesome. You have no idea how much I want this to become a 10,000 pages epic. :D

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 03:18 pm (UTC)(link)
10,000 pages???? *flaps* Well, I suppose work is optional :D

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[identity profile] thisissirius.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 04:49 pm (UTC)(link)
*SQUEAL*

IAHONNES! SHEPHERD! RODNEY AND RADEK AND *claps hands gleefully* WHO IS AT THE DOOR, RODNEY. GO AND SEE RIGHT NOW.

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 06:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Heee, Rodney's working himself up to a rant on inconsiderate people :D

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 06:19 pm (UTC)(link)
\o/
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[identity profile] perardua.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 05:37 pm (UTC)(link)
\o/! More, please!

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-01 06:17 pm (UTC)(link)
I think there will be! :)
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[personal profile] aurora 2008-05-01 10:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!

[identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com 2008-05-02 02:00 am (UTC)(link)
Yayyyy dolphin sounds!!

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