The convoluted sentences? How it vanishes from your memory even as you read it? Oh, sweetheart, as if...;)

Well, with your BB story fresh in mind I think of the way you bring a dream-like element into your stories and make it work really well. Also, intimacy between characters (our favourite boys, of course) mmmm, you can feel it. Dear god that was incoherent, but in my defense it's two in the morning and I'm trying to finish an SG-1 kidfic. Ah, sorry.